Look before you leap

   In Language class, the teacher Andrea Shejter told us to write a story following the title: "Look before you leap". For this task, we were asked to use connectors, examples of direct speech, 3 similes, 1 metaphor and 2 examples of past perfect. This is my text...

   I wish i hadn`t disobeyed my mom, however, somehow my excitement drove me to this crazyness as a little kid going to the fair. However, the scenery wasn`t like i had expected. Earlier that day, i had told my mom that i was going to Clara`s house, my best friend, to study, nevertheless, now, i was getting my make-up done so as to go to the club. On the other hand, Clara told her mom that she was staying at my house. If our parents found out, this would be bigger than an eruption from a volcanoe.

The music, as loud as a furious crowd, entered to mu brain and transported me to another distressful world. "This is so much fun!" Clara shrieked while she was jumping. Out of the blue, a desperate yell took me out of my euphoria. "Leave me alone, don`t touch me!!!" a voice of a woman screamed. I followed the agonized cries, without knowing exactly where i was going. I pursued my instinct until a guy stopped me. "What are you doing here?".