Look before you leap
In Language class, the teacher Andrea Shejter told us to write a story following the title: "Look before you leap". For this task, we were asked to use connectors , examples of direct speech , 3 similes , 1 metaphor and 2 examples of past perfect . This is my text... I wish i hadn`t disobeyed my mom, however, somehow my excitement drove me to this crazyness as a little kid going to the fair . However , the scenery wasn`t like i had expected. Earlier that day, i had told my mom that i was going to Clara`s house, my best friend, to study, nevertheless , now, i was getting my make-up done so as to go to the club. On the other hand , Clara told her mom that she was staying at my house. If our parents found out, this would be bigger than an eruption from a volcanoe . The music, as loud as a furious crowd , entered to mu brain and transported me to another distressful world. " This is so much fun! " Clara shrieked while she was jumping. Out of the blue , a