Informal Letter
Dear Jeckyll,
How are you? It's been a long time since we meet in that lovely cafe before i was going to Paris.I went to lots of places and i bought you lot of gifts too. I hope you like them. My flight arrive before i thought so i have more time. I'm very anxious to see you and your surprised face when you see me.
While i was in Paris, i could visist the Eiffel Tower and one of the most important museum. My trip was great but you know i wasn't there on holidays. I was there because i must convince the director of an important company called "Google". I thought that it was going to be easy but it took me a lot of time but finally i convince him. When we meet i will explain you with more details about this.
I'm trying to go to your house next Monday but if can't i will call you. Give all my kiss to Pool.
See you soon,
David
How are you? It's been a long time since we meet in that lovely cafe before i was going to Paris.I went to lots of places and i bought you lot of gifts too. I hope you like them. My flight arrive before i thought so i have more time. I'm very anxious to see you and your surprised face when you see me.
While i was in Paris, i could visist the Eiffel Tower and one of the most important museum. My trip was great but you know i wasn't there on holidays. I was there because i must convince the director of an important company called "Google". I thought that it was going to be easy but it took me a lot of time but finally i convince him. When we meet i will explain you with more details about this.
I'm trying to go to your house next Monday but if can't i will call you. Give all my kiss to Pool.
See you soon,
David
Nice idea, but be careful with language, especially tenses. Don't mix them. Nice job!
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